I was having a conversation
With Kate on her post called folly
I replied in descending
Syllables. Had her guess
What it was I did
The first lines are
Here for you
To read
Enjoy
I chose to write in descending syllables
Because of I remembered Girl of two worlds
She did some verse on her awesome blog
Her words were like glittery pearls
I planned to do it just now
For a moment in time
But continued on
Found it really
Lotsa fun
Your turn
Now
Write it on here
Or your blog
To link
Here
Journey to life 
Very cool, Eliza! Love it. ♥️
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Awaiting yours!
How are you?
Hello
There
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I am well; taking it one day at a time. ✔️ Yes, I am working on my memoir. It is coming along. Big Hugs! ♥️
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lol this is fabulous darling!
I am just back from a
thirty kilometre
cycle … phew
fit 🙂
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Wow! Along the beach I hope…
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no flat bike paths, get off for the few roads I have to cross … only one very steep hill I had to walk up but on the return trip I gathered so much speed I didn’t need to peddle for kilometers, I love that!
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What a fun post, Eliza! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
You’re never too old to try something new.
A descending rhyme seems like fun to do.
Don’t expect me to write anything wise,
just a silly little ditty to tease the eyes,
a playful rhyme for Eliza and Kate.
I’m writing now without any wait
to wish you both a lovely week
full of all the joys you seek.
Each day do your best,
then enjoy your rest.
Dream about your
favorite place,
awaken with
a smiling
face!
🙂
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This is awesome!!!!
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Thanks, Eliza. It was fun to write. Thanks for suggesting it! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Lovely!
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Thank you!!!
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Laughter and sunshine
brighten a day
for play
yay!
Dr. Bob
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They do indeed
Give sunshine
And joyous
Hearts 💕
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I had a wonderful Sunday
Saw an old friend
Took a walk
And later
I sleep.
Zzz
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Sleep well!!!
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Wow this is so cool, Eliza!
Might try it as well 🙂
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Yes please! If you link it here we can check it out…
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Sure 🙂
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You are so creative, it’s good to see.
Much love to you and keep posting!
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I’ve never done this before
But it is fun to do
Counting syllables
Make sure they’re right
Counting till
Get to
One
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I must say, what lovely fun!
Minus one, ’til you’re done
But there’s no ending
Just descending
Once again
Back to
One!
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Keep on going
And going
Going
Gone
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I love the rhythm of these
Makes you think of your words
A slightly odd voice
Calm observer
No judgement
And then
Done
This is so fun I love it Eliza! In my head I read it out very plainly and simply and it’s very refreshing, like I said there’s no judgment about it, just some words and observations floating around. Thanks for encouraging us to try 🙂
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Yeah it is fun
Counting words
One by
One
Or
Yeah its lotsa fun
Counting out sounds
One by one
Until
Done
It bothers me when the lines are shorter if you know what I mean.
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I think you have created something great!
I get what you mean about the l i n e s
Maybe you can s p r e a d it all out
To make it f i t and l o o k like
We are m o v i n g towards
A single d i s t a n t
Point at the e n d
S e e h o w I
Spaced it
O u t ?
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That’s an idea
With some merit
Can try it
Like this
Yeah?
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Y e a h! It’s interesting to
Experiment with t h i s
It’s really m a k i n g
me start to think
from a n e w
perspect
i v e.
😀
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I’m enjoying spending time
Writing to you in rhyme
It is just today
Hip hip hooray
Jump up up
Jump down
Clown
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Awwww, E!! Thank you so much for that. You really ARE the best.
Well… here’s my attempt?? I don’t know?? Just trying??
Reading is awesomeness,
It is comforting,
I feel better,
Happier,
On a-
-break.
(Basically took your advice and read for a while)
Love this, E. Thank you once again for your pingback and kind words!!
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Taking a break
Gives one space
To learn
More
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☆ ～(‘▽^人)
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I have no idea what to say
other than possibly oy-vey.
What you want from us is neat
But all I think of are feet.
What’s going on with you?
I’m staying golden!
This has no sense.
Decipher
or not
Ha!
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It was pretty easy to decipher
I counted the syllables you used
That is the beauty of it, see
It makes nonsense sensical
We can talk absolute
Garbage and rubbish
And it’s the best
For anything
On earth
Counts
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But your comment makes sense
Mine does not at all.
But you are right –
No one cares
All good.
Fun.
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I do not care
See, I love
All your
Words
You sprinkle stardust
And golden light
Wherever
You go
Glows
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Your words touched my heart
Like rain for dry
soil they fell
onto
me.
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You write well
My dear
Friend
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OK, so how does this thing go?
My words, don’t they often grow?
Yet to economize,
I’ve come to realize,
Is a must.
I should trust,
Good prose
Knows.
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You’ve got it
Almost
Pat
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Count the syllables
One less per line
Until you’re
Down to
One
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Hi Eliza,
This was a lot fun to read. The comments also!
Hoping you are well! Blessings! ♥♥
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Yup the comments were
Indeed fun to
Read and write
One by
One
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